Ignite presentation learner response

 1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

Marks 
-Research- 4
(through presentation and blog)
-Tv drama concept: 4 
(crime genre )
-Language-terminology and theory -3
-Representations-1
-audience and industry-3 
-Delivery-3
-total -18/30
written feedback
-good title-already sounds like a Netflix show! nice references to similar shows too.
-great to see character names-helps bring it to life.
-research/inspiration makes perfect sense 
-some details of actual extract-could do with some more on actual narrative/3 minute plan 
-update -next slides cover more on extract!
-12+age is interesting -would that work for this subject material? Drugs etc but your point on a moral message is interesting 
-stuff on promotion/industry is interesting and shows understanding of audience. Not a specific part of brief-remember the pint element is a tv magazine .
-presentation has great images but also some typos and timing isnt always there. Overall idea is strong though and i think this could be very effective 
-Q&A picks up on British  culture/topical element with solid answer 
-Representation on area to focus on in sol but still lots of good ideas here.

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.
WWW: I have good context on the concept, plot and message that I am trying to present, and good Mise en Scene on costuming.
EBI: I need to work on my diegetic and non diegetic sound that I use. I also need to make sure that as I am filming in an outside location that the sound is picked up very well. 

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 
I would need to update my statement of Intent as I believe that I might change one of the locations to do with the public transport section. I believe that it is achievable as I think I will be able to get that London British culture feel through the filming outside and through the mise en scene of the costuming. I think I need to expand on the media theories and terminology in my statement of intent. 

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