Preliminary exercise: TV drama scene

 1)  Top boy- clip stef and ZT get back on mails 
the mise en scene of the nice cars (from the money they made through drugs)
the empty petrol station suggesting that it is late at night so no pedestrians will see to help them. 
the costuming of the tracksuits and the bally (face masks) being used as it is an typical UK road man/gangster costuming which builds the British culture feeling 
the props of guns being used and pulled out builds up tension as the audience as on edge waiting to see if someone will get injured
the mid shots during the fit to show multiple people fighting then the close up when they are speaking to show the facial expression clearly build up more intensity 
furthermore the tense non dietetic sound builds up more intensity  

2) power- ghost gets Tommy out of jail
the mise en scene of the court law room and the costuming of the jumpsuit that Tommy is wearing, the judges outfit and the lawyers wearing the professional clothing 
the evidence being pulled out on the paper makes the audience feel more included
the intense music gives a intense build up until the audience hear the verdict  
the close up shots of the facial expressions show how the characters are feeling 

3) snowfall - Franklin kills Andre
there is cover the shoulder shots to show the intensity between the dispute between both characters 
the music stops and then he gets shot there is a build up using non diegetic sound 
the gun being held in hiss hand pointing down could make the audience anxious 

Script 


 
1  INT. TRAVAILING HOME TO THE SHOPS
  Hand held shots of train coming in
  Its broad daily light Jordan is walking off the train, shots from behind him coming off 
  Direct shots in front of him coming off the train then camera follows him from behind a he walks 
  through the station and then front shots of him walking out towards he road with his air pods in.
  Jordan calls his mum 
                                             Jordan
                        Hey mum, I'm going shops is there anything you need?

    mum on the phone (audience isn't able to hear her )

                                             Jordan 
                       are you sure?
                                (waits a moment for his mum to finish speaking)

                       hm alright then
                         see you bye 

    Jordan continues to walk down the street 
 

  2 INT.CORNER SHOP 
    Jordan walks into the corner shop and buys a drink and sweets and walks back out 


 SHOT LIST

Shot.no 

 

1 

Long shot of Jordan walking off the train

2 

Dolly, mid shot from behind as he taps out

3 

long shot as he comes out the train station

4 

Dolly long shot from behind  as he is walking towards the corner shop

5 

Long shot from the right-side of Jordan walking towards the shop  

6 

Mid shot from Infront of him  

7 

Long shot as he walks into the shop 

8 

Over the shoulder, mid shot as he grabs the drink and snacks  

9 

Over the shoulder mid shot when he his paying for the snacks  

MISE EN SCENE 

CAST
Jordan- protagonist 
Devonte 
Kyle

COSTUMING 
tracksuits(Nike tech/adidas etc)
Devonte and Kyle will have face masks 
props the brick phone (drug 'trap' phone)

LIGHTING 
Natural lighting from outside depends on the weather aswell.

SETTING 
Greenford or Sudbury
 

shooting schedule

Its being filmed at Sudbury hill station or Greenford station (however I am thinking that Sudbury hill is better as Greenford station is quite busy most the time it could cause difficulties with filming).

actors is going to be;
 zak S- Jordan 
Jibril - Kyle 
Zak C- Devonte 

Filming times is 12-4pm (before it gets dark)
Filming days is some point in the half term this depends on how the weather. 
If it takes multiple days filming then I will choose 2 days where the weather is similar 

my viedo

https://youtu.be/Uf4XJNySv4c?si=gXA8ykOk2x1e7aA5

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